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The Messed-Up Camping Trip

Post  Franni on Sun Feb 17, 2008 5:15 pm

I made this story a lloongg time ago! I think RyRy (Spottedleaf) remembers it.

The Messed-Up Camping Trip
by Franni

It was a dark night at the woods. Sylla and Riley were apparently camping for their first time. They were pitching a small red tent right in the middle of the woods, surrounded by trees and bushes.

"Do you have the hammer?" Sylla asked Riley.

"No," Riley replied. "I thought you had it!"

"GREAT! Now how are we supposed to pitch a tent?"

"Do we really need a hammer to pitch a tent?"

"HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO KNOW? I never even went camping before!"

Sylla sighed and used her foot to stomp on the nails. Riley helped out too, and tripped. She stumbled onto Sylla and they both collapsed in a heap.

"Arggh!" Sylla groaned. Riley whimpered. "Just help me tighten thestrings!" Sylla cried out. Sylla and Riley bent down and tightened them.

"Now that's done, let's make a campfire." Sylla said. Riley nodded.
They both teamed up to gather some sticks and rocks for the fire.

Once they got all their needed materials, they set up their campfire.

"Let's make the fire now." Riley suggested.

They both each got a stick and rubbed it quickly on a rock. Then they started to blow on it.

25 minutes later . . .

"I give up!" Riley threw her stick and stone onto the campfire. A
fire suddenly burst out.

"Riley, you are a GENIUS!" Sylla hugged Riley and started to jump
up and down.

Suddenly, thunder roared and lightning flashed on the sky. It started to rain.

Sylla and Riley cried out and ran into their messed-up tent. Their fire was completely gone.

Sylla started to sob. "This is the worst camping trip ever!
Everything has gone wrong!"

"Not everything." Riley replied. She took out a roasted marshmallow
on a stick and handed it to Sylla. "When you were doing your happy
dance, I started to roast some marshmallows."

"Thanks!" Sylla exclaimed. Her face brightened with delight. They
both happily chewed on their marshmallows.

Suddenly something rustled outside their tent. Sylla and Riley exchanged looks of fear.

"MONSTER!" they both shrieked. They both hugged each other and wailed.

"Calm down, Riley." Sylla said. "I'm going to peek outside and see
what it really is."

Sylla crawled to the side of the tent and unzippered the zipper a little. She peeked out. A small squirrel, wet from the rain, looked up at her and squeaked.

Sylla zippered the door quickly and faced Riley.

"IT'S GODZILLA!" Sylla screamed. "Are you sure it wasn't King Kong?" Riley asked.

"Quiet or it will eat us!" Sylla shrieked.

They both dove into their sleeping bags.

"Actually, this was a pretty fun camping trip." Riley said.

"Be quiet and go to sleep."

"Good night, sleep tight, don't let the bed bugs bite."

"AGGH! I THINK SOMETHING BIT ME!"

End.
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Post  Spottedleaf-BoomShakaLaka on Sun Feb 17, 2008 5:16 pm

Franni wrote:I made this story a lloongg time ago! I think RyRy (Spottedleaf) remembers it.

The Messed-Up Camping Trip
by Franni

It was a dark night at the woods. Sylla and Riley were apparently camping for their first time. They were pitching a small red tent right in the middle of the woods, surrounded by trees and bushes.

"Do you have the hammer?" Sylla asked Riley.

"No," Riley replied. "I thought you had it!"

"GREAT! Now how are we supposed to pitch a tent?"

"Do we really need a hammer to pitch a tent?"

"HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO KNOW? I never even went camping before!"

Sylla sighed and used her foot to stomp on the nails. Riley helped out too, and tripped. She stumbled onto Sylla and they both collapsed in a heap.

"Arggh!" Sylla groaned. Riley whimpered. "Just help me tighten thestrings!" Sylla cried out. Sylla and Riley bent down and tightened them.

"Now that's done, let's make a campfire." Sylla said. Riley nodded.
They both teamed up to gather some sticks and rocks for the fire.

Once they got all their needed materials, they set up their campfire.

"Let's make the fire now." Riley suggested.

They both each got a stick and rubbed it quickly on a rock. Then they started to blow on it.

25 minutes later . . .

"I give up!" Riley threw her stick and stone onto the campfire. A
fire suddenly burst out.

"Riley, you are a GENIUS!" Sylla hugged Riley and started to jump
up and down.

Suddenly, thunder roared and lightning flashed on the sky. It started to rain.

Sylla and Riley cried out and ran into their messed-up tent. Their fire was completely gone.

Sylla started to sob. "This is the worst camping trip ever!
Everything has gone wrong!"

"Not everything." Riley replied. She took out a roasted marshmallow
on a stick and handed it to Sylla. "When you were doing your happy
dance, I started to roast some marshmallows."

"Thanks!" Sylla exclaimed. Her face brightened with delight. They
both happily chewed on their marshmallows.

Suddenly something rustled outside their tent. Sylla and Riley exchanged looks of fear.

"MONSTER!" they both shrieked. They both hugged each other and wailed.

"Calm down, Riley." Sylla said. "I'm going to peek outside and see
what it really is."

Sylla crawled to the side of the tent and unzippered the zipper a little. She peeked out. A small squirrel, wet from the rain, looked up at her and squeaked.

Sylla zippered the door quickly and faced Riley.

"IT'S GODZILLA!" Sylla screamed. "Are you sure it wasn't King Kong?" Riley asked.

"Quiet or it will eat us!" Sylla shrieked.

They both dove into their sleeping bags.

"Actually, this was a pretty fun camping trip." Riley said.

"Be quiet and go to sleep."

"Good night, sleep tight, don't let the bed bugs bite."

"AGGH! I THINK SOMETHING BIT ME!"

End.

Ha! I remember this like it was yesterday, of course, everyone calls me Riley instead of the proper way to spell it Very Happy
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Post  Franni on Sun Feb 17, 2008 5:25 pm

LOL yeah! Actually Ryry I named the character after you because I wrote the story on the day we met! Very Happy Which I think was a loongg time ago!
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Post  Spottedleaf-BoomShakaLaka on Sun Feb 17, 2008 5:31 pm

Franni wrote:LOL yeah! Actually Ryry I named the character after you because I wrote the story on the day we met! Very Happy Which I think was a loongg time ago!
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