Bright Sun #2

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Bright Sun #2

Post  Spottedleaf-BoomShakaLaka on Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:39 pm

The time has begun for the cats to escape. The time has come to escape their home of Sin City.


Chapter One
Tallie gestured her tail for the cats to come. Lassie came first, Frillie came second, Coniellia came third, and the Cat Princess and Prince, Sally and Roger came last. "Yes?" They all muttered. "Its time to leave our homes." Tallie explained. "Why would we?" Sally asked. "The humans have been stealing our food, and scaring us with lights," Tallie murmured. "And they make so much noise in the night time its terrible!" She added. All cats besides Tallie gasped.

Chapter Two

Tallie watched the humans take their cat food bags away, and they threw it into a fire and it burned. They went to get the water dish and all cats stared in horror as they burned the water dish. "No!" Tallie cried out. The human turned towards her and jumped at the cats. Bubbles, the kitten, stared in awe as her mother, Coniellia snatched her up, and bumbled off. The cats sped off as the human raced after them, and got into their cover with jet black paws, and sped even faster after them. "Help!" Tallie screeched at the entrance to Stripe's door.

Chapter Three

"Stripes!" She yowled.
"What?" The black cat with orange stripes murmured.
"HELP! THE HUMANS ARE GONNA KILL US!" Tallie squeaked loudly.
*Chapter Preview*


Last edited by Spottedleaf on Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:20 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Chapta Three now!)
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Post  Spottedleaf-BoomShakaLaka on Wed Mar 19, 2008 2:25 pm

Bumpity Bumpity Bump! :Doom
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Post  Pawsie on Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:38 am

I liked that sPot. Your a good writer! cheers
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Post  Franni on Fri Mar 28, 2008 8:38 am

That was great!! Very Happy Mouse brained twolegs... Mad
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